Hello guys! Guess what’s baaaaack?
You know, when I was younger, I never would’ve thought that I would have thought I would get to where I am now. I was just content to write my little stories, without a care in the world. And now here I am, posting those little stories on my blog, making fun of how ridiculous they are.
In a sense, it’s kind of cruel. Sorry little me. XD
But anyways, let’s get right into this one. I wrote this weird little thing in ‘play’ form, for some reason. So the stuff in parentheses are the actions. Why? I don’t know.
Because I told you so!” (snaps fingers and Magali sits down immediatley)*
*Wow, so spoopy. Woah.
“What’d you do?”
“I put an obedience spell on you.”
“When will it go away?”
“When I want it to.”
(Magali sits motionless in the dark tower)*
*Can I just say, I am so confused right now. Who’s talking? Who is this other person? Someone’s name is Magali, but who is it?
“I see you were out playing with the village kids,”*
*How old is this guy? Who says ‘village’? And if you’re old enough to say ‘village’, then wouldn’t you say ‘children’ instead of ‘kids’? -_-
“yes they’re very nice, and….”
“you are not to play with them!”
“because I said so.” (Magali sadly looks out the window)*
*I feel like I need to clarify, that dialogue doesn’t go with the action next to it, it should be on a separate line, but…I wrote it like that for some, confusing reason? What even, little me?
7 years later……*
*That’s a lot of little periods. Wowza.
(Magali is hanging out with friends when suddenly)*
*Suddenly…what? Is that supposed to be like a stupid narrator cut to the action?
“Ha! yeah! Magali you’re so funny!”*
*Who says that?
(crash of lightening)*
*A lightbulb illuminates the area! XD
“What are you doing here?!”
“Zedidiah?! what do you want?!”*
*I think these are supposed to be the friends speaking, but at this point, I just really don’t know anymore.
(Other kids run away screaming leaving Magali all alone)*
“What was that for!?”
*What the heck, he’s so blunt. ‘Magali.’ ‘Come.’ ‘Because I said so.’ Like, what’s your problem, dude? XD
(back in the tower)*
*Classy scene cut.
“Magali, I would like to share a secret with you, but first, meet Nells and Xab.”*
*Seriously, what kind of names are those?? Nells? Xab? Did I think I was cool?
(Magali waves nervously) “hi.”
(Xab looks at Magali carefully)
“She will do.”*
“You will become one of us.”
“Yes, I’ve been waiting for this day to come.”
“No! I’m not like you guys, I don’t want to be evil.”
*Yes, I wrote ‘gasp’. Yep.
“And I’m leaving.”
(Magali jumps out of the tower)*
*Um BAD IDEA. DO YOU KNOW HOW TALL A TOWER IS?!
“You will regret greatly for choosing this, Magali!”*
“uh, should we go get her?”
“No, I’ve got a better Idea,” (Smiles evilly)*
*Oh gosh, we’re going there? -_-
(Magali hurts her self jumping from the tower, but still runs away)*
*YEAH YOU NITWIT.
“I’ve gotta hide.”
(runs into a thicket of trees)
(stops to rest) (and think,)
Well. That was…interesting. XD Well, PP posts are back! (At least while I have embarrassing writing in stock, which I do.) Let me know if you think this could be a successful screenplay in the comments!